Hit List: First Draft Reflection

My first draft of The Hit List wasn't all that bad but I still definitely have some work to do if I'm going to make this from good to great. One thing I knew even when I was performing was that I skipped a huge portion where I talk about how people pay too much attention to social media and television. I have to get that part down and I have to be able to act it out without thinking twice about it which if I continue looking it over like I have been then I should be fine. Also, my facial expressions and movements have to be rehearsed a little ore but that is just a matter of me finding what is comfortable which can just be easily acted out as I read through and make notes to myself. Overall, I feel like I am getting a better feel for this part every day that goes by and every day that I read it over and I feel that when the time comes to film the final draft I will be ready.